【标题请求】
你的同伙Jack因为长时光玩电脑游戏,如今头痛、眼睛不舒畅、腰背酸痛,而且睡欠好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情形,并给出你对他的建议。
请求:(1)内容包括所供给的信息,可恰当施展;(2)书写卖力,句子通顺;(3)词数:60词阁下。
【优良满分范文】
Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
【参考译文】
杰克是我的同伙。他异常爱好玩电脑游戏。他经常坐在同样的方法太长而不移动。如今他头痛,眼睛疼,背疼。他晚上睡欠好,所以他天天都认为累。
我以为他应当分开电脑歇息。他不应长时光应用电脑。他应当做眼保健操,放松眼睛,晚上早睡。
我想假如他好好歇息,他很快就会好的。